How to Write a Thesis Statement
Remember that a thesis statement is a sentence in which you express your opinion and take a position on some issue or controversy. Goshgarian uses the word "claim" to mean the same thing, so don’t be confused by the way they discuss this topic in the book.
I think a good thesis statement has "argumentative edge." That is, it does three things: shows the reader that you are aware that some people disagree with you; expresses your central position; and gives an overall, general reason why you have taken this position.
Therefore, I give students a formula for drafting a thesis statement, using three key words:
Although -- tells the reader you recognize disagreement or opposition
nevertheless -- tells your basic position
because -- tells why you choose that position
You can use these key words to create a single sentence that expresses your central position on an issue. Here are two examples, each taking a different side of the capital punishment controversy:
Although victims’ families might like to have revenge,
nevertheless, capital punishment should be abolished because life without parole is cheaper and makes the criminal face his guilt longer.Although it doesn’t deter other criminals,
nevertheless, we need capital punishment because each execution makes it certain that one murderer will not kill again.
It is important to realize that all three key words don’t have to end up in the thesis statement; grammatically, you don’t need the word "nevertheless" in the above examples. However, it is helpful to use all three key words when drafting your thesis because it forces you to think about both sides of the issue.