Term
Paper
Your term paper asks you to write 9-10 double-spaced, typed pages explicating T.S. Eliot’s poem, “The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock” or writing a literary analysis of William Faulkner's novel, As I Lay Dying or Arthur Miller's play, Death of a Salesman.
If you choose to write
about "Prufrock," select passages from throughout the poem, comment on them in
some insightful, coherent way, and support your reading with an occasional
quotation from one of the sources provided.
Just don’t let the scholars take over your paper.
Draft some of your own ideas and then see what the bigshots have to say.
Use a minimum of five sources (in addition to the poem).
If you choose to
analyze As I Lay Dying, here are some possible topics (however, you are
not limited to these -- make up your own):
As I Lay Dying as a
Naturalist Novel
As I Lay Dying as a Modernist
Novel
As I Lay Dying as a Realist
Novel
Narrative Experimentation in As I Lay Dying
Addie's Ideas about Language in As I Lay Dying
Family Dynamics in As I Lay Dying
Psychological Approaches to As I Lay Dying
If you choose to analyze
Death of a Salesman, here are some possible topics (again, you are not
limited to these choices):
Miller's Portrayal of Women in Death of a Salesman
Father-Son Relationships in Death of a Salesman
American Capitalism and Death of a Salesman
Willy's Flashbacks and Hallucinations and the "Present" of Death of a
Salesman
A Comparison (or Contrast) of Death of a Salesman and King Lear
(or MacBeth)
Use a minimum of five sources (in addition to the play).
One of the major purposes of this paper
is to acquaint you (or re-acquaint you) with the Modern Language Association
(MLA) system of research documentation, which is the conventional method of
documentation used in the field of literary studies.
I have done some research for you.
I have placed photocopies of relevant pages from the following three
books on reserve in the library:
Headings,
Philip R. T.S. Eliot, rev.
ed. Boston:
Twayne, 1982.
Gish,
Nancy K. Time in the Poetry of
T. S. Eliot. Totowa, NJ:
Barnes & Noble, 1981.
Spurr,
David. Conflicts in Consciousness:
T.S. Eliot’s Poetry and Criticism. Chicago: U of Illinois P, 1984.
Also
on reserve is one book: Williamson,
George. A Reader’s Guide to
T.S. Eliot, 2nd ed. New
York: Farrar, Straus & Giroux,
1966.
You may also use the online databases JSTOR and NC LIVE to find articles.
Go to the Shaw home page and click “Libraries.”
Scroll down and click “Databases.”
For JSTOR, type
“Eliot” and “Prufrock” (without the quotation marks) into the full text
search boxes. Scroll down and click
“Languages and Literature.” Then
click “Search.” Many articles
appear on the results list.
For NC LIVE, click
“Browse Resources,” then “Alphabetic.” Then click “Academic Search Premier.” Type “Eliot AND Prufrock” into the search box (again,
without the quotation marks). Click
“search.” When I did this I got
a results list with 24 articles.
At least one of your five sources must
be from either JSTOR or NC LIVE and must be newer than 1996.
I am picky about several things in
student research papers: giving proper credit to other scholars, quoting correctly
from “Prufrock,” not letting your research take over your paper, following
manuscript conventions, and having a correct Works Cited page.
English majors might want to buy a copy of the MLA Handbook (available at
most bookstores).
Giving proper credit:
In any paragraph where you use a quotation or paraphrase, you must
identify the work and the author whose words or ideas you are borrowing.
Use this formula: In Title,
author verb, “Quotation” (#). For
example: In Conflicts in
Consciousness, David Spurr argues, “Ash Wednesday gave form to a poetic
persona torn between imagination’s fulfillment in the created world and the
mind’s need for a more permanent, external source of understanding” (79). A full identification is necessary the first time you refer
to a work. After that, you can
simply refer to the author. For
example: Spurr further suggests, “Eliot’s natural vision reveals itself in the poet’s simultaneous
fear of and attraction to natural forces” (94).
Please note that there is no “p.” before the page number.
Note also that the period ending the sentence occurs after the page
reference. Note that book titles are
underlined. If citing an article,
place the article title in quotation marks:
In “Title,” author verb “quotation” (#).
How to quote from “Prufrock”:
You need not use the formula for quoting a scholar; simply lead your
reader to the quotation with a phrase that provides some context or part of your
argument. Four typed lines of
poetry or fewer should be quoted as a normal prose sentence contained within
your own sentence, but you type a slash between the lines and you give the line
numbers of the quotation, not the page number:
For example: Prufrock feels
estranged from his social group: “In
the room the women come and go / Talking of Michelangelo” (35-36).
A quotation of more than four lines should be treated as a “block
quotation”: indent the left sides
of the lines to match the indentation for a paragraph, and type the lines of
poetry as they appear on the page in the book.
Note that a block quotation does not require the use of quotation marks;
the typography tells you it is a quotation.
Tab to near the right edge of the sheet after the last line and provide
the line numbers in parentheses as usual. For
example: Eliot begins his poem with
imagery that suggests the deterioration of society:
Let us go then you and I,
When the evening is
spread out against the sky
Like a patient
etherised upon a table;
Let us go, through
certain half-deserted streets,
The muttering retreats
Of restless nights in
one-night cheap hotels
And sawdust
restaurants with oyster shells: (1-7)
Not letting the research rule your paper:
I have three simple rules for student writers:
1) don’t begin a paragraph with a quotation or paraphrase, 2)
don’t end a paragraph with a quotation or paraphrase, and 3) don't place
quotations back to back. Why have these rules? They
force you to write topic sentences for your paragraphs.
They also force you to write sentences that tell the reader why the
quotation is pertinent to your argument. The
rules also force you to write sentences that connect your ideas from paragraph
to paragraph. The metaphor I use is that of a “sandwich.”
The quotation is sandwiched in between sentences of your own just the way
the peanut butter & jelly are spread between slices of bread.
So use my sandwich metaphor in constructing your paragraphs. It works.
Following manuscript
conventions: A title page is not
necessary. Just type your name and
course info in the top lefthand corner of page one. Skip two lines and center your title over your first
paragraph. All pages should have
1-inch margins on all four sides and succeeding pages should have a header in
the top right hand corner with your last name and the page number, as you can
see on your course syllabus. The font should be
standard (usually Helvetica, Geneva, Times New Roman or Courier. Not italic.) and it should be
12-point in size. The lines should
be double spaced (I have single-spaced this handout to save paper).
Do not skip an extra line between paragraphs (this is a convention for
single spacing). A paper clip is
best for holding the paper together; a staple is also fine.
Do not waste money on plastic or manila folders.
The Works Cited page:
This should be the last page of the paper.
It should contain an alphabetical list of all the works referred to in
the paper. For this paper, the
Works Cited page should have a minimum of six entries: the three books and your
source for “Prufrock,” which for most of you will be the Norton Anthology of
American Literature. Make sure you
indicate which edition you have used. Again,
the MLA Handbook will help you determine the correct formats for your entries.
I have typed up the entries for the books on page 1; just copy them.
Remember that indentation is the reverse of that for paragraphs (so that
the alphabetized words fall on the left hand margin).
Remember that you type two spaces after a period or a colon and one space
after a comma or semi-colon. On the
English 113 page of my website you will find a link on how to write correct
Works Cited entries. Check it out.
And of course, you may visit me during office hours or call me at home.
Sample Works Cited entry for an article
from NC LIVE:
Cervo,
Nathan A. "Eliot's The Lovesong of J. Alfred
Prufrock." Explicator 57 (Summer 1999): 227-
229. Academic Search Premier. EBSCO. NC LIVE.
Shaw Univ., Raleigh, NC. 5 Jan 2004.
<http://web14.epnet.com>.
The
date of access (the date you looked it up; I looked up this article on 5
A lot of students seem to have a hard time
understanding that some books are edited collections of essays and that the
editor of such a book did not write the whole thing. You must give credit
to the author of the individual essay in the book. Here is an example of a
Works Cited entry on a completely unrelated topic, taken from a book in my
office. Use it as a model.
Evans, Malcolm. "Deconstructing Shakespeare's Comedies."
Alternative
Shakespeares. Ed. John Drakakis. New York:
Methuen, 1985. 67-94.
What this means is that in my paper I quoted Evans, not Drakakis. Evans is the author of "Deconstructing Shakespeare's Comedies." Drakakis selected Evans's essay and about a dozen others to include in his book, Alternative Shakespeares. If I also quoted from another essay in the same book, I would cite that author and his or her article title and page numbers. The book information would remain the same. These would count as two separate sources.
Warning: Websites such as monkeynotes.com, sparknotes.com, free-essays.com, pinkmonkey.com, and many many similar sites which purport to be "helps" to students are not academic sources and are not acceptable for use in this paper or in any other paper you write in one of my literature classes. Read whatever you want, but don't take anything from these sites.
Another Warning: I will not tolerate plagiarism! Plagiarism is a crime: theft (taking someone else's work) plus fraud (pretending that work is your own). Do not quote or paraphrase anything from any source without proper documentation. This website tells you everything you need to know to avoid plagiarism, but if you aren't sure, document. Bring me a draft and ask if what you have done is correct. Plagiarism of even a single sentence is punishable by getting a zero on your paper with no opportunity for revision. Don't do it. Anything you can find on the internet, I can find on the internet.
Due date: Monday, April 30. Turn it in earlier (at least a week earlier), if you want a chance at revision. I hope everyone will show me a working draft at least a couple of pages long sometime before turning in the paper. It's scary, I know, but I can help.